wow... what an amazing and emotional drawing... I'm going to start lookin at it that way... you really did just open my eyes to more about just taking a picure. very nice drawing try not to shade as much with your finger, or even a tortillia. try making the shade with your pencil, lightly. just controll the pencil a little better.

Also, if you didn't smear it with your finger, a good idea would be to get a magazine, and then rip out a page (like... from 17 magazine XD they're such a preppy magazine. DIE! XDD) and then always have your hand on it, so when your hand goes across, it doesn't drag the already drawn picture with it. The paper does not pic up or leave anything. Its.... kinda like stain and water proof to an extent XD just try it, you'll c wat i mean. the pencil won't smear anymore :3 also, the lips o out as far as the person's pupils (the center of the eye) and thats supposed to be the max without yanking with your fingers XD so keep that in mind. next time make it a little more narrow

great work, I hope you wanted and could use this crit XD c ya!

This reminds me of when the preist in Hellsing throws all those bible pages around...

And maybe that's why my grandmother is always chasing me with a camera even though she knows I DESPISE it.

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Current novel-in-progress.

oh emmy i love your insanity! the drawing was so emational i loved it and you put up with my insanity as well. im going to miss you when im gone cuz there wont be anyone as crazy as you yo rant about things with or to talk about meaningless things for hours.....

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"Dont write it down for fear it will become words. Just words."--Viggo Mortensen--Apart

:laughs: Thanks for your kind comment. I know about the smudging and stuff, I'm planning to redo the pic later and clean it up a little because of it. I was bored and attacked it to much ^^ ; That and my scanner has a tendency to destroy all hopes of me posting a drawing that actually looks like it was supposed to. Thank you so much for taking your time to critique! *sob* It makes me happy that someone actually took the time to look at it! Cheers!

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--"What's wrong with selfishness and egotism? We live to die smiling, don't we? Mission. Destiny. The cycle of rebirth. Forget them--They've got nothing to do with it."--Saiyuki
--"Death is a bit over rated..."--

XD no prob, I thought the pic meant a lot, so I had to comment

And I don't even have a scanner anymore... I wanna picture destroyer... if anything.. XD I'm stuck with taking pictures of my stuff now XD

I didn't say it's for EVERYONE! *laughs* ERm...yes...Jenns...anime does bad things for your mind, just remember that.

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--"What's wrong with selfishness and egotism? We live to die smiling, don't we? Mission. Destiny. The cycle of rebirth. Forget them--They've got nothing to do with it."--Saiyuki
--"Death is a bit over rated..."--

who is it *Realizes this comment is blunt as hell, but that's ok*

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I held out my finger through the bars. You reached out and curled your tiny fingers around me, so tight. I knew you recognized me. That was the first time I knew I had a heart inside my body.

^^ Thanks it does really. Because a friend of mine always complained about me taking pictures of him, so it's a miny shout to him, not that he'll look at it or anything...

Yeah scanners...are...*shudder* Yeah but you do a lot of your work digitally...I dont' because...*ahem* I'm terrible! *ahem* so yeah *shrug*

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--"What's wrong with selfishness and egotism? We live to die smiling, don't we? Mission. Destiny. The cycle of rebirth. Forget them--They've got nothing to do with it."--Saiyuki
--"Death is a bit over rated..."--

XD digital art isn;t that hard. I'm workin on a traditional pic now... and its so much harder than digital !_!